July 31st, 2014

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Writing Excuses 9.31: Critiquing "An Honest Death"

Writing Excuses 9.31: Critiquing "An Honest Death"

From http://www.writingexcuses.com/2014/07/27/writing-excuses-9-31-critiquing-an-honest-death/

Key Points: What people liked about the story? The main character. "I like stories about people who are competent." When competent characters run up against something outside their competence, that creates good conflict. The concept was good. The pacing was good. The dialogue, the choice of first-person present tense. What's not working? Secondary characters are too similar. Be careful about maid-and-butlering, and overdoing the information. Beware of world builder's syndrome. Watch out for technology assumptions. Sometimes when you think you have painted yourself into a corner, friends can suggest a way out. Beware of over-complicated plans. Make sure you know how the main character is involved in solving the problem.
[Brandon] Okay. This is Brandon from the future, cutting into this episode to say, "Yes, indeed, the Writing Excuses anthology is available. It's called Shadows Beneath. We have it in a gorgeous hardcover as well as in e-book forms on all of your favorite e-book platforms. If you buy the hardcover, we send you the e-book for free. So if you haven't read the story we're doing this week, you'll want to stop right now, pick up a copy of the anthology, read through that story so that then you can follow along with this critique session and see what professional writers have to say about a story going from first draft to last draft."
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[Brandon] All right. So, writing prompt?
[Howard] You have painted yourself with actual paint into an actual corner, but there is a magic system in which the paint and the corner are significant elements. Why is you have painted yourself into a corner such an important element in this magic system that you're going to make up?
[Brandon] Awesome. This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses, now go write.
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